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©2005-2009 =Nimphious
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My Second, more relevent, design attempt for dualTRX's cover contest.

All vector.

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:iconh0zzleh:
i like this 1 :)
shes hawt :P
lol

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:iconmaximuss:
The front cover silhouette is out of proportion, and they lack defining details, there should be more layers to them to increase focus on them. The font on its own seems like it's lacking, the entire thing looks gappy and needs some filler. The back cover silhouette needs more lighting too.

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:iconnimphious:
lol, I left them so simple because it is the theme of the cover. Simplicity. It's what dualTRX likes. Thanks for the crit.
:icondraqza:
boobies! haha... sorry, i'm gettin' old and have to take all the chances i can to be immature :p

anyway... the girl on the right looks good, but the one on the left seems a little odd... i know silhouettes can lack definition just by virtue of what they are, but combining that with the highlights makes it really difficult to figure out exactly what kind of pose she's in and, say, where her body is and where her hair is.

other than that though, i like it and think that the minimalism of it works great.

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:iconnimphious:
lol yeah, I drew the one on the right myself. The one on the left on the other hand I used a reference from a book and it came out a little weird. But I tried to match the simplicity with the cover side's simplicity. So she's alot more basic than the one on the right because her side of the cover is more simple. (It only contains the title)
:iconthe-alchemized:
niiiiiiiiiiiiice man

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